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Proud (102nd challenge) -- by Member: Susan O'Reilly, Ireland -- added: 9/17/2019 12:55:21 PM

Susan O'Reilly said:



ahh thanks Kenneth what a lovely welcome and I'm glad you like this little verse. I was willed to visit voicesnet today (invisible strings lol) and then to write this piece. You are as a remember a great poet and a gent sláinte x

on 9/17/2019 4:39:43 PM

Star -- by Member: Mariam Gabrielle, United Arab Emirates -- added: 9/11/2019 3:56:30 PM

Susan O'Reilly said:



lovely write keep shining

on 9/17/2019 1:43:49 PM

The Very First Star I saw that Night -- by Member: Dwayne Rankin, USA -- added: 9/11/2019 1:51:41 PM

Susan O'Reilly said:



gorgeous write

on 9/17/2019 1:42:56 PM

102nd Roy Kneale Musketeers Challenge - What Do We Do In Heaven When We’re Dead -- by Member: Kenneth Clark, UK -- added: 9/9/2019 1:26:15 PM

Susan O'Reilly said:



fab write Kenneth thanks for the smile x

on 9/17/2019 1:41:45 PM

Control your own fate -- by Member: Vel Champion, USA -- added: 9/3/2019 6:42:16 PM

Susan O'Reilly said:



fab write Val much enjoyed

on 9/17/2019 1:19:57 PM

Painted memories -- by Member: Mark Gittings, UK -- added: 9/2/2019 12:41:56 PM

Susan O'Reilly said:



beautiful x

on 9/17/2019 1:17:50 PM

And we say our problems are massive!!!! -- by Member: Ashay Shanbhag, India -- added: 9/14/2019 6:18:28 PM

Susan O'Reilly said:



great write

on 9/17/2019 1:07:04 PM

Getting Old ( 102nd Challenge) -- by Member: Westly Shaw, USA -- added: 9/16/2019 7:32:30 PM

Kenneth Clark said:



Quite a vivid picture you paint of yourself in old age Westly but one where you still remain young in heart. For me I don't relish the Idea of all the pill bottles teeth in a glass etc if I ever reach that age of 103. Does he save the best to last, I certainly hope so for the sake of all us oldies. Another fine entry to the challenge. Regards, Ken.

on 9/17/2019 8:16:30 AM

102nd Roy's Challenge what do we do in heaven when we're dead?(What's in Heaven?) -- by Member: Roche Rosos, Philippines -- added: 9/15/2019 1:37:22 PM

Roche Rosos said:



Thanks sir william sir Westly it's been a while I didn't make it to the 101st challenge for some important matter. Truly we don't know what's heaven after life, in my opinion 'im sure up there everyone meets. God bless us all

on 9/16/2019 11:48:24 PM

102 Inspirational Challenge -What do we do in heaven, when we’re dead? -- by Member: Nishu Mathur, India -- added: 9/13/2019 10:32:07 AM

William Willis said:



Hello Nishu, another fine take on Kenneth's title. I have been thinking about this title a lot recently and am ready to unload my thoughts soon. You have delivered yet again. What beautifully laid out rhyme. You start with "It seems like a promising place Idyllic - twenty four by seven." Aye, it better be, being good all my life, I deserve the best. Lol! 5 Star motel standards please. In fact 5 Star plus. You make me smile with "I hope the laundry will be done I suppose whites is what we’ll wear Hopefully the whites will stay all white." I don't even wear white , so we have a problem. Chores keep us sane, as the saying goes. Are we going to a place where insanity reigns. Help! Brilliant Nishu! Wm. *****

on 9/16/2019 8:07:47 PM

Your Love -- by Member: David King, USA -- added: 9/16/2019 5:00:06 PM

William Willis said:



Hi David, some writers on this website run a Monthly Challenge where a writer is selected elect a title for the writers of Voicesnet to write about. This month the title is " What Do We Do In Heaven When We Are Dead."As you can see there have been many poems already posted re this title. We like to offer new poets here a chance to enjoy these Challenges. Why not have a go. It's just for fun and also a test for each writers imagination. If you have a go then I wish you well my friend. Your poem obviously takes us to the realm of heaven and we see you speaking of a lost loved one. Some lovely lines in this poem as in " Now as the years go by, you still are with us, even looking down from Heaven, you are still with us in our hearts." Again I enjoyed the serenity of " Your love falls on us like rain, your soft voice is like a gentle breeze." I am intrigued in the line " younger, and happier than you've ever been, glowing in the pure radiance of Heavens true beauty within." I think you have a vision already of what is behind the hidden spiritual wall. A poem full of love and a sincerely uplifting read. Wm.

on 9/16/2019 7:57:44 PM

102nd Roy's Challenge what do we do in heaven when we're dead?(What's in Heaven?) -- by Member: Roche Rosos, Philippines -- added: 9/15/2019 1:37:22 PM

Westly Shaw said:



Thanks for sharing!

on 9/16/2019 7:52:55 PM

Respect the Blue -- by Member: David King, USA -- added: 9/16/2019 5:26:06 PM

Westly Shaw said:



Five stars!

on 9/16/2019 7:49:32 PM

A Bridal Song -- by Member: Naveed Khalid, Pakistan -- added: 9/16/2019 2:33:38 PM

Westly Shaw said:



Enjoyed!

on 9/16/2019 7:48:51 PM

Your Love -- by Member: David King, USA -- added: 9/16/2019 5:00:06 PM

Westly Shaw said:



Beautiful and in my opinion this poem is what the 102nd Challenge is about Love from above and life. Enjoyed!

on 9/16/2019 7:48:17 PM

Bon -- by Member: Dale Costello, Australia -- added: 9/16/2019 1:47:27 PM

Westly Shaw said:



Enjoyed!

on 9/16/2019 7:46:04 PM

A mile, -- by Member: David King, USA -- added: 9/16/2019 4:50:58 PM

William Willis said:



Another honest assessment on today's society David. Our world is riddled with the ways of the badmen. Let's rout them out through good old fashioned values.

on 9/16/2019 7:46:01 PM

Respect the Blue -- by Member: David King, USA -- added: 9/16/2019 5:26:06 PM

William Willis said:



Hi David, a very respectful piece regarding our Police. Many have a huge dislike for the "boys in blue" but they will no doubt require their services one day. I enjoyed this piece. Wm.

on 9/16/2019 7:43:09 PM

Alice -- by Member: Dale Costello, Australia -- added: 9/12/2019 12:54:36 PM

Dale Costello said:



Thank you Naveed, Westly, Nishu for reading my poem firstly and then taking the time to leave me a few words.. I found your line.."empty of such looks like those sockets which spin the world around my head." especially potent Naveed. Cheers and warm regards to all

on 9/16/2019 4:21:22 PM

A letter from your pet in heaven ( 102nd Challenge ) -- by Member: Westly Shaw, USA -- added: 9/15/2019 1:17:31 AM

William Willis said:



Take a bow Westly. Taking Kenneth's title on from a different angle is what we have here. Your dog may have passed but what a clever one as he can write too. The joy of poetry is here for all. A title made in England and the title hops the many miles across the Atlantic Ocean and has your good self telling a tale of a dogs wishes and thoughts in heaven. Could you have written this without Kenneth's prompting Westly. Yes probably but would you have. Definetly not. Ahhh! The beuuty of The Inspirational Challenge. You take us to Gods luxurious kennels and was moved by much of this as with " I still sit on the couch, only its one of God's now. And I still leave my scent on every shoes."Again I praise the connection between you both by giving you thumbs up for the line "We often play a game of hide and seek And I still give out fleas and make everyone itch with rough, red, sandpaper bumps." Nice to hear from your dog Westly. A Five Star Dog and a Five Star poet. What a take on the 102nd Challenge. Wm/|\ *****

on 9/16/2019 2:38:01 PM

102nd Roy's Challenge what do we do in heaven when we're dead?(What's in Heaven?) -- by Member: Roche Rosos, Philippines -- added: 9/15/2019 1:37:22 PM

William Willis said:



Hi Roche, keeping it simple with our thoughts of what awaits seems to be the order of the day here. Kenneth has given us much to think about. You have hit on a point not already raised here. Do we still have the names we have here on Earth? Interesting point. The pain of living, the pain of dying neatly summed up dear Roche. ***** /|\ Wm.

on 9/16/2019 2:18:21 PM

Playing Yahtzee in Heaven ( 102nd Challenge) -- by Member: Westly Shaw, USA -- added: 9/14/2019 11:17:43 PM

Dale Costello said:



I quite enjoy a game of Yahtzee. thanks for sharing Westly

on 9/16/2019 2:15:13 PM

102nd Roy's Challenge what do we do in heaven when we're dead?(What's in Heaven?) -- by Member: Roche Rosos, Philippines -- added: 9/15/2019 1:37:22 PM

Roche Rosos said:



Hello Sir Kenneth Thank you very much for your appreciation indeed it is a great title challenge. God bless us all

on 9/16/2019 1:27:51 PM

Electric Everywhere -- by Member: Cynthia Baldwin, USA -- added: 9/14/2019 9:27:31 AM

Cynthia Baldwin said:



Thanks! ??

on 9/15/2019 8:15:06 PM

102nd Roy's Challenge what do we do in heaven when we're dead?(What's in Heaven?) -- by Member: Roche Rosos, Philippines -- added: 9/15/2019 1:37:22 PM

Kenneth Clark said:



Hi Roche, enjoyed your response to the challenge, until our time is called no one knows what waits in heaven be it family friends, or what we might be, I guess thats the uncertainty that blights most us. ***** Best wishes, Ken.

on 9/15/2019 5:33:28 PM

102 Inspirational Challenge -What do we do in heaven, when we’re dead? -- by Member: Nishu Mathur, India -- added: 9/13/2019 10:32:07 AM

Nishu Mathur said:



Thank you Kenneth, Westly, Chad - I suppose as spiritual beings we may not need to do these mundane chores? There may be no need? Dunno. I do like the idea though - of not cleaning etc. I don’t know the Bible too well. My spiritual believes are evolving. Such an interesting title, Kenneth. Fondest

on 9/15/2019 12:08:43 PM

Born To Be -- by Member: Chad Martinez, USA -- added: 9/13/2019 10:59:33 PM

Nishu Mathur said:



Inspiring words, Chad. A very motivational poem. Enjoyed reading this. Fondest

on 9/15/2019 12:03:34 PM

A letter from your pet in heaven ( 102nd Challenge ) -- by Member: Westly Shaw, USA -- added: 9/15/2019 1:17:31 AM

Nishu Mathur said:



Heart warming, Westly. Lovely read. Uplifting too. Fondest

on 9/15/2019 12:01:56 PM

When We Value Peace More -- by Member: Mike DeVincenzi, USA -- added: 9/15/2019 9:18:43 AM

Nishu Mathur said:



Wise words, Mike. Let’s value peace. Competing against one another has its pitfalls - a great read. Fondest

on 9/15/2019 12:00:49 PM