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What Shall It Be? -- by Member: Nishu Mathur, India -- added: 2/20/2020 10:03:02 AM

Drsudarsan Prasad said:



That is amazing, a gross understatement. What an amazing poem this is , a real jewel. Congrats Nishu. This is the best poem I have read for quite sometime. *****. Warm regards and thanks . Good night

on 2/23/2020 4:55:39 PM

Turning into an atheist....... -- by Member: Eisha Gohil, India -- added: 2/8/2020 1:34:45 PM

Eisha Gohil said:





on 2/23/2020 3:47:47 PM

This Afternoon All Clocks Went Wrong...Friday The 13th, Monsters ball ( take 2) -- by Member: Nishu Mathur, India -- added: 9/13/2013 1:27:23 AM

Frank Davis said:



"Monster's Ball'' sounds like a birthday party for my ex-father-in-law. Highly entertaining, Nishu!

on 2/23/2020 9:27:39 AM

OF JUNE’S WINTER SONNET -- by Member: Adam Archer, Australia -- added: 6/27/2018 6:45:13 PM

Frank Davis said:



A lovely creation, Adam. Very much enjoyed the read!

on 2/23/2020 9:14:23 AM

My Dream for Tomorrow. VN February Challenge -- by Member: Denis Barter, Canada -- added: 2/22/2020 7:48:38 PM

Nishu Mathur said:



A powerful call for compassion and acceptance, tolerance and love. Very nicely written Rhymer, a wonderful dream to have. Maybe one day. The world can do with a lot more kindness. Fondest to ye both.

on 2/23/2020 7:00:48 AM

Painful Purge (10w) -- by Member: Frank Davis, USA -- added: 2/22/2020 8:38:30 PM

Nishu Mathur said:



Insightful and cleverly penned, Frank...brief, alliterative and a very succinctly expressed sentiment. Fondest

on 2/23/2020 6:56:45 AM

Ash -- by Member: Noor Melissa Nor Hadi, Malaysia -- added: 1/14/2009 12:19:37 AM

the unspoken said:



When the sun stops to shine its light, When the light stops to glow its bright, It’s never you,it will never be you, Who will disappear from my heart. No matter,no matter, Somewhere,anywhere,everywhere, There is someone in this land, And this someone will always remember you,mel. 22022020

on 2/23/2020 5:55:09 AM

RUNNING WATER (Onomatopoeia) -- by Member: Lee Emmett, Australia -- added: 7/13/2008 11:36:09 AM

the unspoken said:



great!

on 2/22/2020 7:02:35 PM

HAIKU** – 84th Musketeer Inspirational Challenge: The sun, the moon and the truth cannot be hidden. -- by Member: Adam Archer, Australia -- added: 1/28/2018 8:46:37 PM

the unspoken said:



good luck.

on 2/22/2020 6:40:34 PM

Win Or Lose -- by Member: Deanna Dilley, USA -- added: 4/15/2007 7:16:44 PM

the unspoken said:



great!

on 2/22/2020 6:35:59 PM

Ash -- by Member: Noor Melissa Nor Hadi, Malaysia -- added: 1/14/2009 12:19:37 AM

the unspoken said:



When the sun stops to shine its light, When the light stops to glow its bright, It’s never you,it will never be you, Who will disappear from my heart. No matter,no matter, Somewhere,anywhere,everywhere, There is someone in this land, And this someone will always remember you. 2222020

on 2/22/2020 6:29:58 PM

HAIKU** – 84th Musketeer Inspirational Challenge: The sun, the moon and the truth cannot be hidden. -- by Member: Adam Archer, Australia -- added: 1/28/2018 8:46:37 PM

Frank Davis said:



Challenge, more than well met! Masterful use, individually and collectively, of the 5-7-5 Japanese form. . Both your talent and your craft, Adam, are, undeniably, top-notch!

on 2/21/2020 9:08:20 PM

DEMAGOGUE (A POEM TO NIGERIA) -- by Member: Ugwu Elvis(Leonard D Great), Nigeria -- added: 2/21/2020 11:14:59 AM

Franklyn Orode said:



A satiric depiction of Nigeria's poor leadership problem. Nice work

on 2/21/2020 12:11:06 PM

One Diagnosis -- by Member: Frank Davis, USA -- added: 2/20/2020 1:53:18 PM

Adam Archer said:



Some poets are too clever by half. This is sharp-witted writing in your inimitable style, Frank. A great observation, comrade. Good day.

on 2/21/2020 7:40:41 AM

DROWNING -- by Member: Ugwu Elvis(Leonard D Great), Nigeria -- added: 4/8/2015 12:43:26 PM

Adam Archer said:



Often the deluge of social obligation renders individuals feeling overwhelmed and the sense of ‘drowning’ is overpowering. Fortunately that angelic “beautiful white eagle” appears thus faith saves us from the obscurity. I enjoyed reading this, and your clever use of onomatopoeia and metonymy. Thank you and good day.

on 2/21/2020 7:00:58 AM

HOLDING A PALM FULL OF SUNSHINE ! -- by Member: Drsudarsan Prasad, India -- added: 2/19/2020 3:05:00 PM

Adam Archer said:



Written in the words of a doting grandfather. Grandparenting beautifully expressed. A winsome verse. Good day, Sir.

on 2/20/2020 3:05:43 PM

What Shall It Be? -- by Member: Nishu Mathur, India -- added: 2/20/2020 10:03:02 AM

Adam Archer said:



A new opus from your quill exudes the finest usage of juxtaposition. Nishu, it renders me in complete appreciation of your craft! Good day, Ma’am. ***** Stars.

on 2/20/2020 2:44:25 PM

God Give Me Strength -- by Member: Lady Shaula Salathe, Australia -- added: 2/20/2020 4:36:40 AM

Adam Archer said:



Indeed more strength, wisdom and courage need to be sought. There is a seraphic air to this lyrical verse. An inimitable style, beautifully expressed. Good day to you.

on 2/20/2020 2:42:41 PM

THE REBELLION AVERSION -- by Member: Adam Archer, Australia -- added: 2/20/2020 5:24:11 AM

Ugwu Elvis(Leonard D Great) said:



beautiful!!! a world concern, great piece keep it up.

on 2/20/2020 12:13:20 PM

What Shall It Be? -- by Member: Nishu Mathur, India -- added: 2/20/2020 10:03:02 AM

Frank Davis said:



A gorgeous piece of work, Nishu. You are the thorn-less rose--an extremely rare variety. Gratifying read!

on 2/20/2020 11:39:27 AM

THE REBELLION AVERSION -- by Member: Adam Archer, Australia -- added: 2/20/2020 5:24:11 AM

Frank Davis said:



Eloquent and witty entertainment. Exquisitely done, gifted poet!

on 2/20/2020 11:31:37 AM

My Dreams for Tomorrow, Starts with Today ( The Challenge) -- by Member: Westly Shaw, USA -- added: 2/19/2020 1:42:01 AM

Nishu Mathur said:



Very enjoyable Westly. Made me smile. Such delightful work. Descriptive and quirky. Fondest

on 2/20/2020 10:01:47 AM

Rite of Passage -- by Member: Frank Davis, USA -- added: 2/19/2020 5:30:37 AM

Nishu Mathur said:



Yes, a few words and you nailed it. Very true, Frank. Fondest

on 2/20/2020 9:59:07 AM

HOLDING A PALM FULL OF SUNSHINE ! -- by Member: Drsudarsan Prasad, India -- added: 2/19/2020 3:05:00 PM

Nishu Mathur said:



So charming and endearing, Drsudarsan. I can sense your happiness and feel the little ones mischief. A beautiful, upbeat, happy poem. Little ones give a lot of joy through their innocence and naughtiness. Very nice. Fondest

on 2/20/2020 9:58:23 AM

God Give Me Strength -- by Member: Lady Shaula Salathe, Australia -- added: 2/20/2020 4:36:40 AM

Nishu Mathur said:



I think so many of us can relate to your lyrical words here. Yes, indeed, we all need strength, lots of it. Take care. Beautiful work. Fondest

on 2/20/2020 9:56:29 AM

THE REBELLION AVERSION -- by Member: Adam Archer, Australia -- added: 2/20/2020 5:24:11 AM

Nishu Mathur said:



Written with such cheekiness. Enjoyed, Adam. I can relate to this! Love the mock epic, heroic touch. Fondest x

on 2/20/2020 9:54:49 AM

Rite of Passage -- by Member: Frank Davis, USA -- added: 2/19/2020 5:30:37 AM

Adam Archer said:



The transition from childhood to adulthood – every parent prays for a graceful one. An affecting sentiment, Frank. Good day to you.

on 2/20/2020 6:44:35 AM

Caution -- by Member: william andrews, Greece -- added: 2/19/2020 9:51:03 AM

Ugwu Elvis(Leonard D Great) said:



simple and precise. keep your muse flowing.

on 2/19/2020 12:15:47 PM

setter-poem for Westley Shaw -- by Member: Anna Banasiak, Poland -- added: 2/19/2020 9:51:14 AM

Ugwu Elvis(Leonard D Great) said:



short and wonderful.. I love the imagery please keep writing

on 2/19/2020 11:57:25 AM