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The look of the rain from the Writing Collection of Yannis Apostolos Politopoulos, Greece

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Yannis Apostolos Politopoulos, Greece

Short Story

The look of the rain

This is a story from the moist drops of a wild, a merciless oblivion.
A sequence of events initiated by the clouds of heaven with winter destination eyes of women.
The woman that stood opposite the closed window watching the rain drops off the floor of the courtyard.
It is the woman who once embodied the absence of the eyes of a man. She escaped from the shackles of a violent man and yet sweet. The woman's brain.
Even now standing by the window the rain, she has not found the words to describe accurately the brain.
But it was not fleeing and falling.
Do not come to any given destination in contrast to the rain that always leads inevitably to the ground.
But she thinks the same with her tears. Those for whom even knows the cause that makes them roll under the shadow of the eyelid.
She thinks the rain is over, when the silence distract her eyelids the light of the future, the eyes of the heart. From that childhood dream back years and years in the eyes of a life manned by the blue sea falling in love the random children's suggestive that even God finds it difficult to understand.
Then this woman happens to be identical with the rain and looking forward to the rain the rain poem writes the autumn afternoons in the glass windows of a summer that was telling lips lovers midnight. Lovers who fell in love with the story was to realize and eventually managed to overcome rewriting a version for every season.
Why have learned that the rain and cry when the eyes thickens in front of the vastness of a sun porch that was forgotten the loneliness and left naked waiting for their lovers and children of another, a cozy life of a truly affectionate silence.
And then she stops looking for the causes of the flight and identified with the event of rain, the state of rain caress that is running in full just a kiss, to create the beginning of an unexpected return to the union of two texts, which like written at different times by different hands, yet so easy to join, so unexpectedly, word for word, kiss by kiss, page by page while browsing through the vastness of a single imagination.

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PetrosAwesome!Hellas9/5/2012 3:30:09 AM
An old friend?xcellent!!!Hellas8/18/2012 1:56:20 AM
RaniaReal Literature!Hellas7/11/2012 11:05:51 AM
PanagiotisWe need the look of the summer also!Hellas5/2/2012 4:24:21 AM
ChristinaI loved it!Cyprus3/13/2012 10:47:12 AM
AntonyThe best short text I have ever read!Italy3/7/2012 2:59:01 AM
MariaThe best short story of all times!!!Hellas2/10/2012 2:46:10 AM
ElenaOnly one man in the world can write so beautifully, so real, so authentic. Besides, he makes it so many years for his students!Hellas11/9/2011 3:02:50 AM
NefeliThe best short story ever! Literature extracted from the love of words, nature and life!HELLAS10/25/2011 3:25:31 AM
?a???Congratulations for the story!Greece should be proud and pleased!Greece8/3/2011 6:01:17 PM
argyrhsexcellent fabulous marvelous.!!greece7/19/2011 5:21:03 AM
lilagreat!!!!!!!!greece7/18/2011 2:51:26 AM
SOPHIE AGDIJUST PERFECT !!!!!!!!!GREECE5/18/2011 4:47:58 AM
Sweta(priyam) BanerjeeOhh!!!!its just exellent.and yeah no other words i can utter .....congratulations.u deserve this..carry on....:)India5/2/2011 11:22:47 PM
VANIA GANTZOYit was a really wonderful short- story! You must be a very sensitive man who can really use the words! Hellas must be proud of having such a briliand author. keep up the good work! SPAIN5/2/2011 12:17:33 PM
Marcia SchechingerYannis a beautiful tale of rain and the tears of woman. With an easy flow you have written a story that all who feel and respect life and its changes can identify with. Through the "window pane" and the heart of women the story of life is told. Congratulations on the well deserving first place win on VoicesNet for March 2011. Thank you, a very lovely story. USA5/1/2011 8:41:53 PM
thelmaYannis Apostolos Politopoulos of Greece Congratulations for your first place with this very enchanting story The look of the rain!5/1/2011 8:15:54 PM

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